elisi: Edwin and Charles (Not Fade Away by amavel_bel.)
elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote2006-01-04 04:37 pm
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Birthday fic for a very special girl!

Today is the birthday of the very lovely, very clever and very brilliant [livejournal.com profile] molly_may! I hope you are having a fabulous day with much Spiky goodness and that someone got you some sort of 'Buffy Expert' certificate. [livejournal.com profile] avrelia made you one already, didn't she? *facepalm*

Now I (very unusually) come bearing fic! I was attacked by a particularly vicious plot bunny, and this was the result. I really hope you like it. It will probably turn into a series of ficlets (with time and inspiration), but for now this is all. Sorry about the present tense, I'm afraid it couldn't be helped.

Rating: PG-13 I guess.
Setting: Shortly after the fade-to-black in NFA.
Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] kathyh for the read through. :)

ETA: This is a stalled WIP. It might get finished some day, since I know how it's going to end, but I have no idea how to get there. So don't hold your breath, sorry.


Only a girl...


It’s dark. The rain lashes down, washing their bloodied faces and making it hard to distinguish their foes. Angel knows that Gunn went down a while ago, but he has no space for grief, no time for mourning. All there is in the world is fighting - thrust, twist, duck, stab, move on. He knows Spike is on his right, Illyria on his left and he keeps an absent note of where the dragon is positioned in the sky. But no matter how many he kills, they just keep coming. No relief for muscles that are now screaming.

Then the dragon swoops down, and as he ducks its deadly flames, he sees Illyria gracefully leap onto the neck. Swearing he tries to jump after them, but it’s no use. Then the onslaught breaks forth again and he must continue fighting.

Suddenly there is a bright light - so searing that Angel automatically cowers and tries to shield himself. A fraction of a second later he realises that the light comes from the dragon that is now swerving dangerously between the buildings in the narrow alley. Seconds later it crashes to the ground in front of them, crushing untold demons under its bulky mass. Illyria is perched proudly on the neck, her hands twisting the head at an unnatural angle, letting the strange light stream forth. Angel senses Spike coming up next to him, limping, his face furrowed in incomprehension. “What the hell is she doing?”

The older vampire shrugs, half-remembered knowledge surfacing. “Tapping the dragon’s magic?”

He notices the black burn marks on Illyria’s unbreakable hide, and thinks to himself that it’s not fair that vampires are so flammable.

A smile breaks out over the God’s face and suddenly the sound of thunder rolls along the ground. Then darkness breaks out in front of them, like a column of smoky ink, licking the wet tarmac. A shape grows out of the black; hesitant and insubstantial at first, then slowly gathering volume until the figure is clear.

Angel stares. It can’t be...

In front of them stands a middle-aged, silver haired man. His face is a blank, and his suit fits like a glove. In his left hand he holds a briefcase. But two large horns grow out of his forehead. Large and solid, they twist backwards in decreasing loops.

Behind him, Illyria says triumphantly: ‘I brought you The Ram.”

The Ram smiles pleasantly and looks around. “How... nice to be here,” it says, before raising an arm. With a wave the demon army, thronging to get past the dragon, disappears. At the same time, the light turns off. “I don’t think we need that anymore, do you?” The Ram continues, glancing over its shoulder at Illyria.

Angel reels inwardly as he blinks in the sudden gloom. He is finally face to face with a Senior Partner. Although he has no doubt that its real face is very different. Question is: Can he kill it? His hand clenches around the hilt of his sword and The Ram looks at him sharply. “Do not think you can kill me, Angel. But...”

They lock eyes, then The Ram continues. “...I will offer you a deal.”

It is only a year since the last ‘deal’ - and look where he ended up. Angel begins to shake his head, but The Ram holds up a hand. “This one is different. If you agree, we will leave this dimension - forever! We will close down every branch, stop the apocalypse - more than you could ever hope to accomplish yourself.”

Angel’s eyes narrow. “What do you want me to do?”

A smile that would have made Lindsey MacDonald look like an honest man. “Only to kill... this!”

The left hand containing the briefcase stretches out, and the case becomes enshrouded in the same kind of strange impenetrable blackness that enveloped the figure before. It swirls slowly and then pulls back, leaving in its stead a large woven basket. A small hand can be seen waving above the edge, but that is all.

Angel freezes. It can’t be...

He can almost feel the wheels in Spike’s brain turn. “Didn’t Darla once...?”

“Shut up!” he replies. Looking at the creature in front of him he asks: “You want me to kill the child?”

“Seems a small price, doesn’t it?” The Ram says blandly. After a small hesitation, it continues. “Kill is actually not quite accurate. We want you to sire her and then keep her alive. As a... legacy of our work here. If she dies, we return. Those are the terms.”

If Angel was still capable of being shocked, this would have rendered him speechless. As it is, he thinks he understands in part what they’re trying to do. Worn out he rubs his face, absentmindedly noticing the blood on his hand. Weariness lies on him like a stone mantle - he had thought that he would now be done with tough decisions. The acts he has committed to get to this point - those whose deaths he has ruthlessly caused - he can feel them weigh him down, almost to the point of blotting out his soul. But none of those were innocent.

He still remembers the feel of the infant Connor in his arms, how he was ready to give up the entire world to save him. Could he do the opposite? Destroy and warp something so pure? He needs to buy time...

“Why her?” he asks, thinking that maybe she is the daughter of a president or king. Maybe an immortal like Eve.

The Ram does a good impression of a shrug. “She is nobody. A little orphan, with no extended family. If not killed now, she will die of leukaemia when she’s 23. Our soothsayers were very definite on that point.”

Angel swallows. There is something wrong - something horribly wrong. He can’t fool himself - he could never do what they ask, and he wonders what this child could accomplish in a few short years, that would make the Senior Partners ready to give up this whole world. He suddenly realises that he needs to protect this child, more than anything else. He shifts imperceptibly, and senses Spike tense beside him. Casting a swift look at Illyria, he can see her crouched like a coiled spring on the immobile dragon’s neck. Slowly he takes a step forward. “And if I decline...?”

The Ram smiles. The smile keeps widening, until its face is nearly parted in two, its teeth lengthening and turning yellow. It is a hideous sight, but Angel ignores it, jumping just as a long, bony hand stretches into the basket. Illyria leaps at the same time, latching onto the macabre being, now more animal than human, wrapping her strong, steely hands around the creature’s neck. Angel snatches the basket and jumps clear, just as Spike lands a kick to The Ram’s middle. It folds and then folds again, smog-like tendrils emanating, before suddenly it’s gone, leaving nothing but empty air.

Angel stares at the void, then his eyes slowly travel down to the baby. She’s shivering, only wrapped in a dirty blanket and her tiny face is twisting into a cry.

Spike looks at him, eyebrow raised. “What now?”

Angel doesn’t know. The night is black and cold, and they have nowhere to go. Then the baby begins to cry.

Carefully he puts down the basket, wraps the baby up as much as he can and cradles her under his coat. Then he looks at his two companions. “I think... this girl is the key to everything!”

Chapter 2.

[identity profile] cindergal.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
An intriguing beginning! Looking forward to more.
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[personal profile] shapinglight 2006-01-04 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, intriguing, and great Angel voice!

I have a sneaking suspicion that Angel's last words are more prophetic than he knows.

[identity profile] zanthinegirl.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, very interesting start! I think I like your plot-bunnies.
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[personal profile] gillo 2006-01-04 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Now that's a very interesting start. Love Illyria and teh dragon.

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[identity profile] desoto-hia873.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Intruiging start! And neat to finally meet a senior partner.
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[personal profile] molly_may 2006-01-04 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Whee! I get intriguing new fic for my birthday! Thanks Elisi! I thought the Ram was especially very cool and creepy and very reminiscent of the demons that were on Angel. I look forward to the next part!

[identity profile] annabelle528.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, what a great start! I'm excited to see how it all unfolds. :)

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent start. Hey - if this baby is the key to everything perhaps he better get Dawn to give him some advice!

[identity profile] the-royal-anna.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, what a wonderful beginning! I know I'm always telling you that I love your Angel, but I really, really do. And there is nothing in the world that creeps me out more than animal heads on human bodies (hee! Except the "loan shark" in Tabula Rasa, who I always think is quite sweet) so The Ram was suitably unnerving.

He can almost feel the wheels in Spike's brain turning.

I love that line. That's my Spike-and-Angel. :)

[identity profile] spikesdeb.livejournal.com 2006-01-04 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a wonderful start that's got me hooked. Can't wait for the next bit.

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[identity profile] buffyprof.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
hey, that's really interesting. I thought the writing was very stylish as well.
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[identity profile] scarlettgirl.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
Verrrrry intriguing! So, who is she?

Can't wait for more!

[identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! I'm just ... wow! Can see loads of ideas and themes zinging around the edges of this fic so will be *really* interested to see where you go with this.
He notices the black burn marks on Illyria’s unbreakable hide, and thinks to himself that it’s not fair that vampires are so flammable.
Awww! Poor Angel, always looking for the downside of that whole immortal gig!
Sorry about the present tense, I'm afraid it couldn't be helped.
Ahhhh, we've all done it! fun isn't it?

[identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
Neeeeeed mooooooore.
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[identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
Very interesting premise. Mind if I friend you to keep up with this?

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[identity profile] kittyzams.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
Cool! This is such an intriguing idea. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Very neat take on the Not Fade Away fight. Your writing was gorgeous, really set the scene.

Then darkness breaks out in front of them, like a column of smoky ink, licking the wet tarmac.

Loved this sentence, very evocative. Great start, can't wait for more!

[identity profile] lostakasha.livejournal.com 2006-01-05 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Came to read on a rec by the lovely [livejournal.com profile] lillianmorgan and I'm so glad I did. This fic is dark and intriguing and so well done! I hope there will be more...and hope you don't mind if I add you to my friend/reading list. Don't want to skip a beat on this (but no pressure, though....)

[identity profile] debxena.livejournal.com 2006-01-06 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh. Followed [livejournal.com profile] molly_may's link and I'm glad I did. Fascinating start, and I'm very curious as to where this will go :)

[identity profile] amavel-bel.livejournal.com 2006-01-06 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Great start!!! I'm dying to know what happens next. I friended you, okay?

*smoochies*

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hello there!

[identity profile] sachenka.livejournal.com 2006-01-09 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
lillianmorgan suggested somewhere (sorry) that i give this a try. i'm glad i did and have friended you in the hopes for more. thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] earth-vexer.livejournal.com 2006-01-09 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm another one sent here by [livejournal.com profile] lillianmorgan, and I love this so much (and I think I've read and liked your fic before, so...) I'm friending you.