Cool! This is such an intriguing idea. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Very neat take on the Not Fade Away fight. Your writing was gorgeous, really set the scene.
Then darkness breaks out in front of them, like a column of smoky ink, licking the wet tarmac.
Loved this sentence, very evocative. Great start, can't wait for more!
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Then darkness breaks out in front of them, like a column of smoky ink, licking the wet tarmac.
Loved this sentence, very evocative. Great start, can't wait for more!