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elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote2013-04-02 03:06 pm
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The Silly Pancake (another story by the Cherub, age 7)

Spurred on by last's night success, my youngest has created another story. Hopefully you can follow it, I've not really edited it.

The Silly Pancake
One day it was Pancake Day and the Dad of the familiy made llllllllllloooooooooottttttttttssssssssss of pancakes and everybody had about 4 or 5 each but there was one left but they were all full up.A little girl said 'Can we go bowling in Exscape’ Yes we can do it this Afternoon’ said Dad. Then everybody went to sleep and the last pancake ran out of the door went on the street and went next door.When the pancake went inside he said’ please may i go bowling with you in Exscape of course you can so they jumped in the car and set of to go bowling.First the human being had a go BUT when they got a ball they dumped it on pancake man and he was stuck onto the ball and when she rolled the ball it didn't stick to the floor it stuck to the pins and when the leader saw it it was over the holes so they took of the pins and got a drill and put holes through him and he died. The End. Good Bye.

[identity profile] eilowyn.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I can see why you call her the cherub! So adorable!

[identity profile] the-royal-anna.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no! A tragedy. I was hoping when the pancake escaped he might have had a brief series of adventures with the runaway sausage, but it was not to be. Such a sad death! But no worse than being eaten I suppose.

Next time I go bowling I am going to take a pancake, in the hope that the ball will be less likely to roll off into the gutters.

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*Cackles with Joy and Delight*

That...was EPIC!!

*grins*

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, bless her! It was an awesome fic!

[identity profile] mengu.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
This one already understands the importance of a death at the end.
Edited 2013-04-03 02:48 (UTC)

[identity profile] mengu.livejournal.com 2013-04-04 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, otherwise we'd only have comedies.

[identity profile] geekslave.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
Well, that took an unexpectedly tragic turn. LOL. Your cherub already is learning about adding twists to stories. Very cool.

Stacey

[identity profile] flowsoffire.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, but that's sad! Lots of food-characters from what I can see ;) Cuteeee.