The Silly Sausage, an original story by the Cherub (age 7)

[elisi]

The Cherub decided she wanted to do some writing. This is the result. Hope you enjoy! :D


The Silly Sausage

O ne day in the fridge there was 5 sausages in a packet but one escaped from the packet. Then it ran all over the world for many years and didn,t get hungry because it is a sausage it is a part of food. When it came back into the packet after many years it got noticed by a human being who putt them in a frying pan and ate them for dinner and they had1 each but they didn,t know that they were years old because they looked super delicus and they fiantid s l o w l y like that and fell asleep all through the night and in the morning when everyboddy woke up stright away they were sick. The End.G ood Bye.

Comments

[flowsoffire.livejournal.com]

*giggles* This is adorable!

[elisi]

The Cherub says: "Thank you for saying that I'm adorable!"

[miss-m-writes.livejournal.com]

... Um...

[elisi]

She's clearly inherited your writing skills!

This is your first documented effort (age 6).

Age 7 you were writing Murder Mysteries. (Sorry about laughing, but OMG! You were adorbz!)

[miss-m-writes.livejournal.com]

*Rolls in laughter*

[elisi]

But what happened to Charlie and Barnsly???

[gillo]

Clearly talent runs in your family! (All around the world for many years to come, I hope!)

[elisi]

Cherub: "I like what you say about talents."

[petzipellepingo.livejournal.com]

That was some sneaky sausage!

[elisi]

Cherub: "Yes, it was, I have to say! Goodbye!"

[eilowyn.livejournal.com]

So much fun! Give her a high five from me!

[elisi]

Cherub: "I have just done it! Goodbye."

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Awww!! That is awesome!! *Beams*

[elisi]

Cherub: "Thank you ever so much, I think that sausage was a proper running sausage, like the Olympic people."

[teragramm.livejournal.com]

Nice story!!!! She did an excellent job!

The End. G ood Bye. Too cute.

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Thank you for saying I am cute. I think it was a good story, like you do."

[geekslave.livejournal.com]

Adorable story.

Stacey

[elisi]

Cherub: "Thank you for saying that - I like being adorable!"

Cherish The Cherub

[makd.livejournal.com]

Clearly: you have the makings of a Joss Whedon there. Cherish The Cherub.

Re: Cherish The Cherub

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Thank you! And I like what you say - the makings of a Joss."

[zanthinegirl.livejournal.com]

LOL at the sausages! Also, eeewww!

[elisi]

Cherub: "OK, that kinda is real."

[thisbluespirit]

:lol: That's great! Very down to earth as well, I like it. :-)

[elisi]

Cherub: "Oookkk"

(That's a slow 'OK'. She dictated.)