elisi: Edwin holding a tiny snowman (one true three by crackers4jenn)
elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote2007-10-24 08:01 pm

Because I've not been able to move all day...

Part 2 of 'AYW + One' is up! I will re-post the whole thing here tomorrow (hopefully), but if you want it now, it's there. Oh and it is LONG! *crawls away*

[identity profile] petzipellepingo.livejournal.com 2007-10-24 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Spike grinned to himself. Life had suddenly become paradise itself. And if the cost was to occasionally let Angel join in - well then that was a price he was more than willing to pay. Because now, finally, he was the one making the rules!


Hey, if Spike is happy - I'm happy. And there will never be daisy skipping for those two.

[identity profile] adoxerella.livejournal.com 2007-10-24 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I use my angst user pic in honor of your threat of angst at the end, because there is so very much more ouch for all three of them that needs to be discussed. *is also evil*

For now, wonderful second part. You really do have a wonderful Angel voice. You nailed him very well and you do a wonderful job of having him come to understand the differences between the Buffy of his past and the current Buffy, and why he still cares for her. And she seems to respect the new Angel as well, which is cool. Plus you wrote an uber hot B/A blow job. My inner shipper is in total squee mode.

Your Spike, is still love. I like the vulnerability he shows when he's talking to Angel once he finally realizes Angel isn't going to go against him. Also, I love his plan (and Angel's payback for Riley, and wasn't that an nice bit of harkening back to beige!Angel when he talked to the Doctor), and enjoyed seeing everyone all impressed with him when it worked out.

Very nice story. Thanks for sharing this.
I hope you feel better soon.

[identity profile] fangfaceandrea.livejournal.com 2007-10-25 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
Good Lord. I want to praise you cause objectively, the writing was awesome, and it was funnny as hell but...but... but.. you made me read Bangel smut!! and Like It!!... I feel all dirty inside. I can't talk about it.. not yet , I need time...