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elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote2005-03-22 02:15 pm

A tiny fic to cheer you up!

It seems as though half my flist is ill or hurt, and it's pretty much the same in RL. Poor Mr. Darcy has got flu and the children are coughing - and of course the holidays have started, so I have them for two whole weeks! At least the weather has suddenly become mild and lovely - there was a definite smell of spring in the air when I walked up to the shop earlier on. And I didn't have to put on my enormous winter jacket! :)

So, to all of you out there feeling unwell, I'm very sorry if I haven't left a comment in your LJ, but I really have been very busy and have only had time to skim my flist. Instead I'll offer up this little fic as a little treat for all of you. And seriously, it's tiny - not even 1000 words. I originally wrote it for [livejournal.com profile] crackers4jenn's birthday, but she's been off-line for a month now (Smite!!!), so I doubt she'll mind that I'm sharing it! Since she has a thing for early Spuffy, that's what I attempted to write. Part 1 today, part 2 tomorrow maybe:

Setting: post-I Only Have Eyes For You
Disclaimer: I own nothing, Joss is god, blah, blah, blah...
Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] lillianmorgan for beta-ing! :)
ETA: Feedback more than welcome! :)



Insane Spike Logic

Part 1

“Y’know - I miss Spike!”

Willow belatedly realised that Buffy was speaking and looked up, her face resembling a question mark. ”You miss - what?”

Buffy, who had been idly flicking through a magazine, sighed and threw it on the floor where it joined a growing heap of junk. Sleepovers were not good for tidiness. “Well, Spike was kinda fun to fight - straight up evil, no beating about the bush! Angelus is just so... mean.”

Her voice trailed off sadly, and Willow nodded although she didn’t quite understand what Buffy was going on about. Buffy obviously noticed, because she tried to explain better: “Well, Spike wouldn’t have killed your goldfish or left me flowers and stuff. I was just thinking -” she stopped, but now Willow was interested: “Thinking what? Go on, this is what sleepovers are supposed to be for - sharing secrets and talking about boys... or, in our case, werewolves and vampires.”

Buffy absentmindedly picked at her newly applied nail polish, and then gave in: “Ok, I was thinking, that if it’d been Spike who had a soul and I’d been dating him - not that I would, ‘cause y’know totally not my type, the hair alone is enough to put anyone of, although the coat was kinda nice in a retro sorta way...” She frowned. “What was I saying?”

“If you’d been dating Spike?” Willow offered.

“Oh, yeah. Well, if he’d then lost his soul, he’d just be all ‘Ha, ha, I’m evil again and I’m so gonna kill you Slayer!’ None of those games that Angelus keeps playing.” She sighed. “Spike was nicely straight-forward. Angelus is all mysterious.”

Willow thought for a moment. “But that’s what you liked about Angel, right? That mysterious thing?”

“Yeah...”

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Outside, under Buffy’s window, a shadow was listening intently. “Interesting...” he murmured to himself, as he threw his cigarette into the bushes and walked off, a small smile on his lips.

Continue to Part 2!

[identity profile] bogwitch.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice start!

[identity profile] jamalov29.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely conversation between Willow and Buffy. And I liked that you pointed out something that I always thought endearing with Spike : he's straight-forward ! Goal-oriented , in a sometimes scaring , but captivating way.

The final lines are promising , to say the least.
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[personal profile] jerusha 2005-03-22 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely!
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[personal profile] fishsanwitt 2005-03-22 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
This is great!
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[personal profile] kathyh 2005-03-22 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Fun start and great Buffy and Willow voices. Looking forward to more.

[identity profile] spikefan.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Too funny--I can just hear S2 Buffy going on like that in her kind of lovable ditzy way. Very enjoyable!
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[identity profile] scarlettgirl.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I love bitty Buffy! And so true! Angel was the boy we crushed on and never, ever understood. Spike was the boy who pulled our hair and annoyed us to death - but you always knew where he was coming from.

[identity profile] cindergal.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup, Angel is mystery guy all right. He plays with his food. ;-)

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

[identity profile] calove.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooooo! Don't stop now!

[identity profile] calove.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I can do patient.

Is it tomorrow yet?

And how's the holiday going so far - children not to awkward I hope?)

They don't break up until tomorrow. I'm dreading really looking forward to it.

I'm sitting here writing some therapeutic Spike while I can.

How about you?

[identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
::giggles::
I especially like the title - which I think was not there when I first read it! :)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/twilight__/ 2005-03-22 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Inventive Season 2 Buffy & Spike encounters are one of my things to read. The sleepover conversation made me smile. The last lines made me very interested in reading the next part. Thank you for sharing this part.

[identity profile] withafireinside.livejournal.com 2005-03-22 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I have no idea where this is going, but it looks like fun. :)

[identity profile] sylva-rerum.livejournal.com 2005-03-23 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. Now I wonder what he's planning on doing...

Buffy's right, Spike so isn't her type. For one thing, he's way too short to be a typical Buffy boyfriend. :)