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[elisi]

the_redjay posted the final chapter of Galimaufrey!

SO GOOD! *wibbles*

(Links to all previous chapters in the post.)

Comments

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

I had a beta tell me once that sentences were not mini-buses (still have that problem, but I digress); she then turned around and flailed all throughout the rest of the fiction. One of the most memorable statements was 'I love this so hard I could barf cupcakes!! OMG!'

After I was finished laughing, I stopped to think it through. There was more squee than correction - and when I beta (poorly) that's usually what happens with me. More squee than correction, lol!

[elisi]

One of the most memorable statements was 'I love this so hard I could barf cupcakes!! OMG!'
That is an amazing statement!

And in this case there was not a lot to fix, to be honest, except little typos etc - the complicated bits (tone, continuity, characterisation etc) was all spot-on. So I allowed myself to indulge. :)

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Isn't it? *Beams* I'll remember that when I'm 80. Maybe not what it was about or why - but that is just the kind of thing that sticks in your mind. *Laughs*

Well, you two rather rock hard, lol!! I can easily see where there was little to fix (but plenty to get excited about). You are both...just that awesome. *Nods* And who can resist a good squee (and why should they?!)

[elisi]

Isn't it? *Beams* I'll remember that when I'm 80. Maybe not what it was about or why - but that is just the kind of thing that sticks in your mind. *Laughs*
Absolutely. And quite right too. :)

Well, you two rather rock hard, lol!! I can easily see where there was little to fix (but plenty to get excited about). You are both...just that awesome. *Nods*
Awwww, bless you. We also like cliffhangers & being evil.

And who can resist a good squee (and why should they?!)
Indeed.

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

We also like cliffhangers & being evil.

*100% marveling approval*

See? AWESOME.

[elisi]

Bless you! ♥ ♥ ♥