ext_21505 ([identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elisi 2014-12-13 03:36 pm (UTC)

I had a beta tell me once that sentences were not mini-buses (still have that problem, but I digress); she then turned around and flailed all throughout the rest of the fiction. One of the most memorable statements was 'I love this so hard I could barf cupcakes!! OMG!'

After I was finished laughing, I stopped to think it through. There was more squee than correction - and when I beta (poorly) that's usually what happens with me. More squee than correction, lol!

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