Nnnnot exactly, since these are thoughts I've been turning over already, but your vid certainly makes for a good argument to support my case. :)
ETA: Additional thoughts - part of me feels you wasted a golden opportunity by not using Old!Ten from LotT in the *actual* birdcage, plus a shot of him clutching the Master's body crying his heart of would have been neat too. (Although maybe you didn't have the footage?)
Nevermind. Most of all, it reminds me of 'I signalled her with my eyes' which is one of my favourite Angel lines ever. All shows should make fun of their own OTT angst! *nods*
I should point out that I don't usually attempt to tell vidders how to improve. I just... found that I couldn't help myself. Cause you know - BIRDCAGE! And somehow laughing at Ten's pain (despite making me feel like a very bad person), is also rather delicious.
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ETA: Additional thoughts - part of me feels you wasted a golden opportunity by not using Old!Ten from LotT in the *actual* birdcage, plus a shot of him clutching the Master's body crying his heart of would have been neat too. (Although maybe you didn't have the footage?)
Nevermind. Most of all, it reminds me of 'I signalled her with my eyes' which is one of my favourite Angel lines ever. All shows should make fun of their own OTT angst! *nods*
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Like I said 'I signalled her with my eyes'... *g*