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Miss M's 'A Breath Of Eternity' Chapter 3.
More fic from my 'little' girl. :) Previouslies here! (Mood theme choice because her best friend is going to a different High School...)
ETA: Note for random passers-by: Miss M is my 11 y.o. daughter. She loves Doctor Who, writes fic and wants to be an author when she grows up.
Title: A Breath Of Eternity
Author: Miss M
Rating: U
Characters: little!Amelia, Raggedy Doctor.
Genre: Adventure.
Spoilers: ‘The Eleventh Hour’.
Summary: Amelia and her Raggedy Doctor experience a rather mind boggling adventure.
Chapter 3
As he awoke, the Doctor’s blurred vision could just make out an orange fog laying over his head.
“Oh no.”
Feeling as though there was no hope, he stood up, sadly. No happiness ever came from meddling, as always.
The cloud had found him, and he was immortal.
He wasn’t angry. He was just incredibly sad and unhappy. Closing his eyes seemed to help a bit, because he could kid himself he was somewhere else - maybe Earth, with Amelia.
Amelia.
He dashed off, remembering the little girl he’d promised himself he’d look after.
Elsewhere, Amelia also was waking up. She sighed happily - it was like she was lying on the softest bed in the universe. Looking down she realised it was just moss.
This put her off slightly, so she attempted to sit up - and flumped back down again.
“What on the -”
She was chained to the floor. Two rings encircled her small wrists, making it impossible to move.
The Doctor wasn’t running now. He took long strides, left, right, left. In the distance he could see movement, someone laying on the floor-someone with red hair.
He picked up speed, faster, faster...
WHACK!!
A punch from one of the aliens sent him flying.
The young girl sighed as the Doctor was put in chains beside her, struggling and kicking out.
She blew her hair from her face in an agitated fashion as the Doctor finally conceded. It was going to be a long day.
After a while of embarrassed silence Amelia decided to forgive him. She could never stay angry with a man who was whistling and trying to twiddle his thumbs, manacles or not.
“What’s going on?”
The Doctor looked awkward.
“Well, nothing, because- because...”
Trailing off into silence, a tear streaked down his cheek, and Amelia worked out the situation in seconds.
“It didn’t touch you, did i-”
The Doctor cut her short.
“Oh yes it did. I was knocked out by these fools,” he gestured to the strangely ape-like creatures, ”meaning I couldn’t stop it.”
He was downright miserable, Amelia could work out that much, at least.
“Who wants to live forever?” the Doctor sang. It was supposed to be a joke, but Amelia could see that truthfully it was plea for help.
Chapter 4.
ETA: Note for random passers-by: Miss M is my 11 y.o. daughter. She loves Doctor Who, writes fic and wants to be an author when she grows up.
Title: A Breath Of Eternity
Author: Miss M
Rating: U
Characters: little!Amelia, Raggedy Doctor.
Genre: Adventure.
Spoilers: ‘The Eleventh Hour’.
Summary: Amelia and her Raggedy Doctor experience a rather mind boggling adventure.
As he awoke, the Doctor’s blurred vision could just make out an orange fog laying over his head.
“Oh no.”
Feeling as though there was no hope, he stood up, sadly. No happiness ever came from meddling, as always.
The cloud had found him, and he was immortal.
He wasn’t angry. He was just incredibly sad and unhappy. Closing his eyes seemed to help a bit, because he could kid himself he was somewhere else - maybe Earth, with Amelia.
Amelia.
He dashed off, remembering the little girl he’d promised himself he’d look after.
Elsewhere, Amelia also was waking up. She sighed happily - it was like she was lying on the softest bed in the universe. Looking down she realised it was just moss.
This put her off slightly, so she attempted to sit up - and flumped back down again.
“What on the -”
She was chained to the floor. Two rings encircled her small wrists, making it impossible to move.
The Doctor wasn’t running now. He took long strides, left, right, left. In the distance he could see movement, someone laying on the floor-someone with red hair.
He picked up speed, faster, faster...
WHACK!!
A punch from one of the aliens sent him flying.
The young girl sighed as the Doctor was put in chains beside her, struggling and kicking out.
She blew her hair from her face in an agitated fashion as the Doctor finally conceded. It was going to be a long day.
After a while of embarrassed silence Amelia decided to forgive him. She could never stay angry with a man who was whistling and trying to twiddle his thumbs, manacles or not.
“What’s going on?”
The Doctor looked awkward.
“Well, nothing, because- because...”
Trailing off into silence, a tear streaked down his cheek, and Amelia worked out the situation in seconds.
“It didn’t touch you, did i-”
The Doctor cut her short.
“Oh yes it did. I was knocked out by these fools,” he gestured to the strangely ape-like creatures, ”meaning I couldn’t stop it.”
He was downright miserable, Amelia could work out that much, at least.
“Who wants to live forever?” the Doctor sang. It was supposed to be a joke, but Amelia could see that truthfully it was plea for help.
Chapter 4.
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I especially loved how grown up Amelia is, compared to Amy who can behave like a child at heart - nice role reversal!
But then, that's so very poignant, the Doctor needing her help. And true. *hugs them both* Poor little guys...!
Another great update, Miss M. *excited to get the first post*
- Redjay x
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This put her off slightly, so she attempted to sit up - and flumped back down again.
I am filing "flumped" away in my mind to use frequently whenever appropriate.
She could never stay angry with a man who was whistling and trying to twiddle his thumbs, manacles or not.
*grins* He would do that, wouldn't he?
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She could never stay angry with a man who was whistling and trying to twiddle his thumbs, manacles or not.
LOL. No, I don't think anyone could stay angry with someone trying to do that.
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Ah, bless her. Amelia certainly gets thrown in the deep in this time.
I can't wait to post the final two chapters!
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Ummm. Flumped isn't actually a word, according to my spell check. Just hope your spell check thinks differently!
Oh yes. Twiddle Twiddle.
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FIRST LOL IN MY COMMENTS! You get the first lol award! It is a fez, made by the wonderful icon makers!
Miss M Is Delighted With Kathyh
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Happenstance Schlappenstance! Not at all random.
Miss M Is Also Delighted With The Redjay Who Is Absolutely Wonderful.
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And so it shall be forever more a real English word.
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Redjay is Delighted with her Fez Award.
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ETA: She means that she is awarding you a fez. Just in case you were wondering. Elisi
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