elisi: 12th Doctor with guitar, mellow (Twelve)
elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote 2016-12-24 03:17 pm (UTC)

Re: Thy humble phantom lurker

I'm slow, but I get there. Finally got round to Phoenix Unbound, which is beautiful and poetic and exactly what a fic of that episode should be. Pulled a handful of favourite lines (which was awkward since ff.net won't let me copy, wft?!):

A voice in the air, an echo in his hearts, letters and questions in white, the teacher standing by the blackboard, the chalk urging him on.
Just love your use of language, it fits beautifully, and captures everything just right.

How did Ashildr put it? Over a hundred thousand hours and you're the best there's ever been.
This was unexpected and delightful.

Ashes to Ashes, dust to dust; and keep going powered by a fairy tale.
Yessss. Fairy tale.

("Promise me, be a Doctor.")
Not easy. But yes, perfect.

As it's Christmas, I am pretty much in the completely wrong mood, but even so it was brilliant. :)

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