*lip wibble* Now THAT wasn't a twist I was expecting. *BEAMS*
Of course it's a fantastic chapter, because they always are, but now I'm trying not to let my lip wibble in front of people... I had the idea for the photographer for aaaages, but once I got to this part I started to look at the whole thing in more detail and... this happened.
and you've dangled THE carrot for chapter 11 y'know. XD Ooooooh, I'm ITCHING to write it!
Some really good lines in there too, like arguing with quicksand, and relationship help desks. Aw, thank you. There was so much that the actual writing sorta fell by the wayside, if you know what I mean. Next chapter might be more lyrical.
And it's nice to see the rest of the 'crowd' returning (: I rather love them all. <3
Just... *wibbles* This is why feedback is so lovely - I see all of them so the individual parts don't affect me all that much. Or rather, I never quite know what impact they'll have.
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*BEAMS*
Of course it's a fantastic chapter, because they always are, but now I'm trying not to let my lip wibble in front of people...
I had the idea for the photographer for aaaages, but once I got to this part I started to look at the whole thing in more detail and... this happened.
and you've dangled THE carrot for chapter 11 y'know. XD
Ooooooh, I'm ITCHING to write it!
Some really good lines in there too, like arguing with quicksand, and relationship help desks.
Aw, thank you. There was so much that the actual writing sorta fell by the wayside, if you know what I mean. Next chapter might be more lyrical.
And it's nice to see the rest of the 'crowd' returning (:
I rather love them all. <3
Just... *wibbles*
This is why feedback is so lovely - I see all of them so the individual parts don't affect me all that much. Or rather, I never quite know what impact they'll have.