I have about 10 different versions - all doing the same thing, but with different wordings and emphasis and I can't choose! Heh.
Ten alternate universes?

I am so pleased with it. Sometimes something just works, and you're not even sure where it came from
That must be the perfect way of describing River's hair. Also River, tbh. And I love that feeling of "did I even write this?"

If I find the time, you might see the first part today.
\o/!