elisi: Edwin and Charles (Not The Last by kathyh (not sharable))
elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote 2011-01-24 07:53 pm (UTC)

Sorry, I couldn't help myself :D
Heeee! I can't believe I didn't think of that! (What I was actually thinking about was some comment somewhere in the Torchwood extra bits where Jack complains about no one being able to work the coffee maker apart from Ianto, so he thought it might be alien...)

Nice transitional chapter.
Thank you. I still can't work out why it was such a pain, but maybe it was just the transitional nature of it.

I like Jack here of course, but I'm wondering what happens when the doctor deal with poor Alex. Granted poor Alex really should have know better, but he is a teenage boy.
Ah, but his thinking was sound, as will become clear in the next chapter. Not that this stops him from sulking for Gallifrey. ;) (Teenage boys are fun!) Anyway, glad you liked Jack - he was a bit all over the map emotionally, but unfortunately that was rather necessary.

And awesome Master!
The Master is always awesome!

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