This whole piece is lovely, and I'm so glad you've put what I've been trying to fic for ages into words. :)
*beams* It felt wonderful to put it all together and see that it all made sense, because it is a tricky issue. (And oh boy, do I know all about trying to put stuff into fic...)

This! It's not about consciously rewriting time, it's about time being in constant flux.
Oh that's a wonderful way of putting it. Yes. It's not so much that things are set in stone as the opposite.

*mems this for future use*
:)