I love your Lucy. SHe's just so wonderfully broken.
Isn't she just? Making her a mother is great. :)

And of course she can't get a hold of the Doctor. It's a Fixed Point, isn't it?
You know, it's fascinating to see everyone's ideas about where the story is going. But I'm not saying anything!

I'm intrigued by Jack's ruthlessness. Very canon, and not what I'm used to seeing in fic.
CoE is overflowing with ruthlessness. I love it. :)

But always good to see more Alex-verse!
AU Alex verse, but yes. Heh. AU from an AU. I don't even know what that is.