elisi: Edwin and Charles (Lucy (choice) by butterfly)
elisi ([personal profile] elisi) wrote 2010-12-16 04:29 pm (UTC)

Ohhhhhh.
:)

Great Lucy pov, and I like that Alex is affected but not completely and enough to snap out of it.
Thank you! And this was the temptation of my 'verse - how would a Timelord child react? And of course he's so young that he can't really explain things in any detail.

"Find one of your own" of course carries a great extra punch.
I was very pleased with that one, yes.

"And then you could come and protect us" immediately after is just so beautifully Lucy-esque as a sequitur.
I absolutely love writing her - in this 'verse her entire focus is her son, which in many ways makes her a lot more dangerous.

Now I'm very curious whether she'll meet Denise Riley.
You'll have to wait and see, I'm afraid...

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