I think I was a bit more enthusiastic than "well enough" *g*.
True. But I didn't really manage to edit in any descriptions, and I'd feel awfully self-conscious praising my writing, even if it was by third party. *hides*

I really love this chapter for all the parallels you draw between Jack and Buffy, which as I've said, I never realised were there.
Thank you again! And I feel like this is almost like a ship-manifesto. Which is nice, because apparently it's working! :)