Utterly wonderful from the first line to the last.:)

While I truly enjoyed how you painted Jack and Buffy and how you showed their lovely connection , I have a special fondness for :
The words blindsided her, and she suddenly felt her chest constricting - the pain that she was getting so much better at living with cutting through her, and for a moment the world dipped out of existence as all she could see were hands enveloped in fire.

Thank you so much.