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Spurred on by last's night success, my youngest has created another story. Hopefully you can follow it, I've not really edited it.

The Silly Pancake
One day it was Pancake Day and the Dad of the familiy made llllllllllloooooooooottttttttttssssssssss of pancakes and everybody had about 4 or 5 each but there was one left but they were all full up.A little girl said 'Can we go bowling in Exscape’ Yes we can do it this Afternoon’ said Dad. Then everybody went to sleep and the last pancake ran out of the door went on the street and went next door.When the pancake went inside he said’ please may i go bowling with you in Exscape of course you can so they jumped in the car and set of to go bowling.First the human being had a go BUT when they got a ball they dumped it on pancake man and he was stuck onto the ball and when she rolled the ball it didn't stick to the floor it stuck to the pins and when the leader saw it it was over the holes so they took of the pins and got a drill and put holes through him and he died. The End. Good Bye.

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Date: 2 April 2013 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eilowyn.livejournal.com
Yes, I can see why you call her the cherub! So adorable!

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Date: 2 April 2013 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-royal-anna.livejournal.com
Oh no! A tragedy. I was hoping when the pancake escaped he might have had a brief series of adventures with the runaway sausage, but it was not to be. Such a sad death! But no worse than being eaten I suppose.

Next time I go bowling I am going to take a pancake, in the hope that the ball will be less likely to roll off into the gutters.

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Date: 2 April 2013 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
*Cackles with Joy and Delight*

That...was EPIC!!

*grins*

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Date: 2 April 2013 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com
Aww, bless her! It was an awesome fic!

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Date: 3 April 2013 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mengu.livejournal.com
This one already understands the importance of a death at the end.
Edited Date: 3 April 2013 02:48 am (UTC)

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Date: 4 April 2013 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mengu.livejournal.com
Oh, otherwise we'd only have comedies.

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Date: 3 April 2013 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geekslave.livejournal.com
Well, that took an unexpectedly tragic turn. LOL. Your cherub already is learning about adding twists to stories. Very cool.

Stacey

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Date: 3 April 2013 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flowsoffire.livejournal.com
Awww, but that's sad! Lots of food-characters from what I can see ;) Cuteeee.

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